LOL OMG... I just about died when I saw this. X'D That is just great.
Buuuut I need more about this character! I NEED TO DRAW HIM! <3
hang on, recovering from DEATH BY HAPPINESS
*revives*
I'm eager to really show what he's like/ who he is, too! (And "eager" is a gross understatement!) Kinda nervous about it, though, as he's not a puppy like Ethan. He's definitely a cat, which might make him seem not so likable!
LOL, all that for more catnip? XDDD Dang, those Renchos are crazy... (wait for it)... cats.
*badum-ksh*
I think it might have been a good idea to have that update as its own page. Having on the same page here kind of messes up the momentum of the scene a bit.
Hmm, I didn't think of it that way because we've reached the end of the chapter, but I guess if you're expecting the scene to continue, this does hit you like an unexpected branch sticking out over the sidewalk.
I'm not sure what'd be a good alternative, though; even if I gave it its own page, wouldn't it have the same effect if you're expecting the scene to keep going?
Initially, yes, but for future reads, it wouldn't be a problem. What you could do is has these updates in their own chapter so future readers can refer to it.
In that case, hopefully this shouldn't be an issue since I'm going to move it to somewhere near the beginning anyway, once I'm done fixing the older chapters. ^^
BTW, I hope I didn't come across as unwelcoming toward suggestions! I love getting constructive critiques, so if you have any more in the future, please feel free to bring them up. ^^
I may, in fact, need some input to fine-tune the exact placement/ manner of this same notice when I do move it closer to the beginning. Any other aspect on recent material (or even on old material, if it's in relation to the newer stuff) is fair game as well!
Why attack the Cat-Man?
He's a mailman essentially. The true heroes of the world!
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