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posted Wed, November 25, 2020

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25th Nov 2020, 12:11 PM

keiiii

Follow the glowy.

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25th Nov 2020, 6:16 PM

melaredblu

You know, the ability to swim is something I would probably take for granted if I were writing a story like this. I know it's a tiny thing, but just the fact that Lu mentions that Ethan knowing how to swim isn't a universal skill, even though it's a very common one in his world, really adds some grounding to this setting. I'm constantly impressed with your eye for detail.

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27th Nov 2020, 10:06 PM

keiiii

Thank you! It helps that I'm basing a lot of it on Korea (where I grew up).

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