I rather like how the background in the first panel came out. Too bad I had to cover up a lot of it with speech bubbles...
Dang! 80 days! Have mercy. o_0
Well, adventure time???? ^_^
Oh okay XD ... I want that ability XDD (making flowers glow pretty <3)
I SEE A SPELLING MISTAKE!!!!
(in the second-to last panel)
If you mean "shpend," that's his accent! Or did you mean something else?
It is pretty subtle, but I don't know how to indicate accent any more strongly than this without sacrificing readability. D:
Danbi is a lovely uncle! Hana's so lucky to have him! ^.^ I wonder if Ethan will go along, he must want to, right? He could find others like him too!
Whew, so I guess it's going to be a long time before they make it there, then? Well, I love a good adventure story as much as the next person. Tally-ho!
love the pacing of the story and the humor!! that flower's luminescence is just stunning to say the least
:D I worry that the pacing in chapter 3 feels a bit too slow... Glad to hear you're liking it!
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