So the first chapter has been given a significant revision! The events are the same as before for the most part, but the vibe should be very different -- and in a good way, I hope. The revised chapter 1 can be accessed on the main site. Currently the CF archive retains the old version of chapter 1; I'm thinking of leaving it that way, as a special time capsule edition.
The revision spans over multiple pages, so give it a look! On some pages, it's just a minor tweak or addition, while others have been rewritten and redrawn from scratch. It was the writing that I wanted to fix, not necessarily the art. Let me know what you think!
Trust me, I understand revisions. I've revamped and revised my comics sooooo many times. :P
Why can't we all just get along and be happy in life? Don't hurt Danbi. He's already been through enough. :/
It amuses me that we're RIGHT at a point where the previous version of this comic (which was only released in Korean) stopped. Then the reboot + English version happened!
Heh... cowards, like all bullies. Look at them run.
Didn't he lose his Suyori abilities in the earlier conflict, or is this a different Elyoi?
That was just the girl! This guy hurt his feet and isn't a suyori/Elyeo at all; he belongs to a separate, shapeshifting species called Rencho.
Thank you. Forgive my poor recollections, I'll go back and re-read.
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