I am PUMPED about the rest of this chapter. I’d written multiple paragraphs of comments, attempting to explain how I feel… but I’ve decided to save it for later/elsewhere. First comes the scene, then comes the commentary. Not the other way around.
Also, fisheye perspective is a lot of fun to draw, even if I don’t get it 100% correct!
Fisheye perspective is really fun! And I think you're doing a really good job within pacing and stuff right now :)
Thanks! It's just a tiiiiny bit slower than I think it should be, ideally, but not enough to call for self-flogging. :3
And now I'm just as pumped to see where this is headed!
Reason A may have been invalidated with what Adela revealed, but now we have reason B!
:D Yay for excitement! Though I have a feeling it's a different kind of excitement than what people are expecting...
Huh. For some reason, I was really expecting them to say she was dead. Interesting to find out that she may still be out there after all.
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