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posted Sun, April 12, 2015

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view keiiii's profile

12th Apr 2015, 8:31 PM

keiiii

Note-chan: "Finally sempai notices me!"

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view rufiangel's profile

12th Apr 2015, 8:40 PM

rufiangel

XD "Do you like me? Check 'yes' or 'no'."

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view keiiii's profile

12th Apr 2015, 8:48 PM

keiiii

http://heartofkeol.com/stuff/en004-note.jpg

!!!!

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view Alicia's profile

12th Apr 2015, 8:54 PM

Alicia

LOL OMG... I just about died when I saw this. X'D That is just great.

Buuuut I need more about this character! I NEED TO DRAW HIM! <3

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view keiiii's profile

12th Apr 2015, 9:14 PM

keiiii

hang on, recovering from DEATH BY HAPPINESS

*revives*

I'm eager to really show what he's like/ who he is, too! (And "eager" is a gross understatement!) Kinda nervous about it, though, as he's not a puppy like Ethan. He's definitely a cat, which might make him seem not so likable!

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view rufiangel's profile

13th Apr 2015, 12:52 AM

rufiangel

LOL, all that for more catnip? XDDD Dang, those Renchos are crazy... (wait for it)... cats.

*badum-ksh*

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view alston123's profile

12th Apr 2015, 10:27 PM

alston123

Dang. Got some crazy stuff going on. -_-

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view NeilKapit's profile

13th Apr 2015, 12:03 AM

NeilKapit

Translated; "I can haz ur blood?"

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view Zor15's profile

13th Apr 2015, 8:24 AM

Zor15

That Rencho is quick.

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view melaredblu's profile

13th Apr 2015, 5:04 PM

melaredblu

I think it might have been a good idea to have that update as its own page. Having on the same page here kind of messes up the momentum of the scene a bit.

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view keiiii's profile

13th Apr 2015, 5:36 PM

keiiii

Hmm, I didn't think of it that way because we've reached the end of the chapter, but I guess if you're expecting the scene to continue, this does hit you like an unexpected branch sticking out over the sidewalk.

I'm not sure what'd be a good alternative, though; even if I gave it its own page, wouldn't it have the same effect if you're expecting the scene to keep going?

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view melaredblu's profile

13th Apr 2015, 5:48 PM

melaredblu

Initially, yes, but for future reads, it wouldn't be a problem. What you could do is has these updates in their own chapter so future readers can refer to it.

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view keiiii's profile

13th Apr 2015, 6:36 PM

keiiii

In that case, hopefully this shouldn't be an issue since I'm going to move it to somewhere near the beginning anyway, once I'm done fixing the older chapters. ^^

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view keiiii's profile

14th Apr 2015, 12:33 AM

keiiii

BTW, I hope I didn't come across as unwelcoming toward suggestions! I love getting constructive critiques, so if you have any more in the future, please feel free to bring them up. ^^

I may, in fact, need some input to fine-tune the exact placement/ manner of this same notice when I do move it closer to the beginning. Any other aspect on recent material (or even on old material, if it's in relation to the newer stuff) is fair game as well!

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view AlphaCalibri's profile

14th Jul 2015, 11:50 PM

AlphaCalibri

Why attack the Cat-Man?
He's a mailman essentially. The true heroes of the world!

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view keiiii's profile

16th Jul 2015, 5:01 PM

keiiii

The Renchos have a bit of a reputation...

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