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posted Mon, March 2, 2015

003-16
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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 12:00 AM

keiiii

Aim well, Ethan.

Danbi is a very considerate person most of the time. But he's so excited to have some company and is forgetting that talking to Ethan right outside the door might make him extremely uncomfortable at a moment like this... XD

Luckily, Ethan is okay with stuff like this as long as the other person is okay.

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view alston123's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 12:46 AM

alston123

Man, this is so cool, and pretty genius. :3

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 2:05 AM

keiiii

Haha, the mold? Yeah, suyori magic has a lot of interesting uses.

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view Spelledeg's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 12:52 AM

Spelledeg

It really is a glowing toilet! :D (well the inside anyway) I like this page a lot because its the kind Where you see small tidbits about the character's thoughts/views without it being said outright. I may not have worded that well ahh.

I also really like the details you put into tthe spores. That's a nice touch :D

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 2:03 AM

keiiii

Really? I was worried that maybe I should've shown Ethan's nervous face in the last panel, instead of handling it with a thought bubble. What were the unspoken thoughts/views that you saw on this page?

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2nd Mar 2015, 11:48 AM

Spelledeg

What I noticed was most for Danbi on this page. Bonding over the toilet and watching Danbi's expression shift when he talks about his master and mother. We already know he's sincere, and though there's some degree of shame associated with male suyoris - it does say that he enjoys(at least to some degree) his trade. That and the 'easiness' - the calmness he's got is very cool.

Then Ethan's starting to become at ease to an extent too. :)

At least, that was the analysis I came to, this page just sealed a few things for me. :D (I hope my analysis isn't too far off OTL)

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 4:42 PM

keiiii

Nah, you're spot on! His mother in particular is a difficult topic for him. Those who know him well would be very surprised that he mentioned her at all to a near-stranger. I think the fact having a wall/door between himself and Ethan made it easier to bring that up, in a weird way.

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view BlueDragon's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 1:01 AM

BlueDragon

I gotta say, this comic is just fantastic. I am both in awe by it's beauty and laughing at the comedy. The characters seem genuine and the story is very enthralling! I was so excited to see there was an update today!!!

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 2:04 AM

keiiii

That is quite a compliment. I'm very flattered. *_* Thank you!

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 1:11 AM

TheD-Wrek

Best outhouse explanation... ever. :D

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 2:09 AM

keiiii

This comic deconstructs a lot of elements that kids like to giggle at, such as toilet or sex. It's a ton of fun for me because I DEFINITELY have an Inner Immature Kid. :3

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view Adina's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 11:57 AM

Adina

This is good!! I like how you keep every page interesting and adding to the plot and/or world.

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 4:04 PM

keiiii

Thanks. I try to make every update count ^^

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view melaredblu's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 1:54 PM

melaredblu

This...is the strangest bathroom I've ever heard of in fiction. But at least it's not nasty.

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 3:57 PM

keiiii

I won the Strangest Lavatory in Fiction award? Awesome!

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 3:45 PM

TheD-Wrek

The lighting coming from the outhouse... I can't get over how great it looks. :)

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 3:47 PM

keiiii

I agonized over the bubble placement in that panel, trying to avoid covering up the prettiest parts. DX

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view Allzephyr's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 7:39 PM

Allzephyr

As cool as that is, I feel that maaaaybe it isn't the best idea to have toilets that could kill you if someone is lazy or forgetful.
Maybe that's just me.

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view keiiii's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 7:51 PM

keiiii

It's why most people don't have them. Those who have this luxury are either super-rich folks who can afford to keep their own resident suyori (kinda like a specialized live-in maid?), or are suyoris themselves. A suyori can quickly fix the situation before using the outhouse. Or not so quickly, if it hasn't been maintained in months.

Even if it's gone toxic, it probably won't kill you outright... unless you're constipated and spend 30+ minutes in there. That would be a problem.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 8:54 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol omg I'm enjoying this pre-poop scene waaaay too much.
On a more serious side note I really like the interaction between two. I sense an impending good friendship here!!!

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view keiiii's profile

3rd Mar 2015, 8:42 PM

keiiii

No place to bond like the toilet!

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view Pholo's profile

3rd Mar 2015, 8:33 AM

Pholo

Hooo man, this looks beautiful! The colors are gorgeous, and I love your use of lighting...the way the light streams out of the house I CAN'T EVEN. Plus your speech bubbles are hella neat.

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view keiiii's profile

3rd Mar 2015, 8:43 PM

keiiii

Aw, thank you. The bubbles take a bit more time than typical ones, but they really complement the rest of the comic, so it's worth it.

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view rufiangel's profile

3rd Mar 2015, 12:27 PM

rufiangel

Amazing page~!! Just so many pretty lights, and that concept!! :D <3

Danbi's expressions are always so beautiful and heartrending too <333

I think the last panel is fine without Ethan's expression. It kinda shows the reader a little more from Ethan's perspective so it works in that way. XD;

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view keiiii's profile

3rd Mar 2015, 8:44 PM

keiiii

Oh? In that case, maybe I should've drawn that panel straight from Ethan's POV... XD Maybe next time, haha!

I'm glad you like Danbi's expressions! <3 Took a redraw or two to get him right, in each panel.

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view Caranella's profile

4th Mar 2015, 11:14 AM

Caranella

I never thought an outhouse could look this gorgeous.

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view keiiii's profile

4th Mar 2015, 1:18 PM

keiiii

Neither did Ethan!

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view AlphaCalibri's profile

14th Jul 2015, 11:25 PM

AlphaCalibri

Nope nope
So much nope

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