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posted Wed, January 8, 2020

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8th Jan 2020, 5:40 PM

keiiii

Update 2 of 2 this week.

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view Marcel's profile

9th Jan 2020, 2:05 PM

Marcel

"What happened?" is exactly what I've been wondering. You've illustrated his confusion perfectly.

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9th Jan 2020, 6:37 PM

keiiii

Thanks! While I don't think of Ethan as 'the' POV character, in this particular chapter, his reactions probably mirror the readers'...

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19th Jan 2020, 2:50 PM

...(RockB)

Huh, I was confused out of my mind at the previous page, but now it makes sense to me, including the "dad" part. Really, now I have a good imagination about what happened. Except that I'm not sure whether the portal was this woman's doing or Ethan's magic going rampant, well most likely hers.

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