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posted Wed, October 24, 2018

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view keiiii's profile

24th Oct 2018, 10:59 AM

keiiii

Update 2 of 2.

Not her first time feeling betrayed in the story...

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24th Oct 2018, 6:50 PM

...(RockB)

Them? Should we the readers know them and the incident in question? I'm confused: I don't remember them being around when she was hit on the head but that's when she lost her powers.

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24th Oct 2018, 7:25 PM

keiiii

They've been traveling with her for a while (they're the people at the beginning of this chapter), so they had plenty of time to find out . But more likely, they were informed of her situation by Lushaka (or whoever contacted them on Lu's behalf) before they even went to pick her up.

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28th Oct 2018, 4:52 AM

...(RockB)

Thanks! Whew... If Lushaka knew or suspected that they would try to capture her and had them informed anyway, then I think he's not the right one for Ethan - too much difference in personalities, I'm sure that Ethan would never do such a thing. Ethan isn't all naive and killing off the terrorists on the train is one thing, but such a thing as this here is quite another level of betrayal...
That said & thinking about it... and even taking into account that Lushaka doesn't like her much... He didn't strike me as that mean/cold-blooded.

Edit: 2 typos removed.

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31st Oct 2018, 8:22 AM

keiiii

Yeah, if he sold her out simply because he didn't like her attitude... that would be a pretty big red flag!

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24th Oct 2018, 8:07 PM

soiamthefreshprince

beautiful pages but its always that way and now this lady is going to have super trust issues smh hope nothing bad happens to her

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31st Oct 2018, 8:32 AM

keiiii

Yep... Even if she manages to get away without physical injuries, the emotional damage is already there.

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25th Oct 2018, 11:41 PM

melaredblu

I wouldn't taunt her if I were you. Loss of powers or not, you have no idea what her physical prowess is, and it's best to assume she's tougher than she looks given her employment history.

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28th Oct 2018, 4:54 AM

...(RockB)

Indeed! She dodged the net quite easily so they should know by now that they already underestimated her.

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