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posted Thu, January 22, 2015

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view keiiii's profile

22nd Jan 2015, 2:56 PM

keiiii

That "slide-tchak" panel required a redraw. The way I had it initially, it was unclear who was doing the closing: Ethan or the kids? I hope it's clear who's doing the action in this version.

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view joeyballast's profile

22nd Jan 2015, 3:10 PM

joeyballast

Of course there's a catch. There's ALWAYS a catch.

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view keiiii's profile

22nd Jan 2015, 10:14 PM

keiiii

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view Adina's profile

22nd Jan 2015, 5:37 PM

Adina

Ah, well, at first I thought it was Ethan closing it -- but that was just me not paying attention to the spoon in his hand. I usually read pages twice anyway to catch details, so it's all good.

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view keiiii's profile

22nd Jan 2015, 10:13 PM

keiiii

If simply reading it twice was enough, then that's good enough for me for now! I'll try to make it better next time (it would've worked better if you could see his hand doing nothing on the LEFT side of the picture, where your eyes go first, rather than the RIGHT side. I think.).

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view melaredblu's profile

22nd Jan 2015, 6:12 PM

melaredblu

Poor Ethan looks so put out. At least he's in good company with Danbi.

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view keiiii's profile

22nd Jan 2015, 10:14 PM

keiiii

He's had a long day, both literally (it was nighttime back in his world when he got teleported) and figuratively.

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view rufiangel's profile

23rd Jan 2015, 1:31 AM

rufiangel

XD;;; Awww, Ethan just wanted to see your widdle faces!

The serious Ethan on this page was hilariously done XD bravo!

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view alston123's profile

23rd Jan 2015, 11:38 AM

alston123

Hmm. Fascinating. To the Heart of Keol we go! ^_^

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