Updates Wednesdays

021-04

posted Wed, May 2, 2018

021-04
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view keiiii's profile

2nd May 2018, 12:20 PM

keiiii

Update 4 of 4.

Ethan's got lots to process...

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view sigpig's profile

2nd May 2018, 4:23 PM

sigpig

I know some girls that would appreciate that appendage...

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view keiiii's profile

2nd May 2018, 5:37 PM

keiiii

Sans the pointy bits, I hope? Not to be judgmental, but the risk of infections is pretty high...

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view StLOrca's profile

2nd May 2018, 8:22 PM

StLOrca

Poor Ethan, you naive fool...

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view The Doodler's profile

2nd May 2018, 10:00 PM

The Doodler

I can't blame him for being kinda shaken. I bet he hasn't seen too many people gorily killed before. D:

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view keiiii's profile

3rd May 2018, 8:38 AM

keiiii

People being killed before his eyes, people trying to kill HIM, and a lethal tentacle... all very new to him, indeed! The said tentacle being attached to a friend only makes it stranger.

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view StLOrca's profile

3rd May 2018, 9:45 PM

StLOrca

Oh, I know; he’s just so trusting. (By the way, I don’t want to seem like I’m clowning on him in any way—I’ve grown quite fond of the big lug.)

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view keiiii's profile

4th May 2018, 6:11 AM

keiiii

(No worries, I got that vibe from your original comment! :D)

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2nd May 2018, 8:23 PM

navegar

Great story update. Thanks

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view ...(RockB)'s profile

2nd May 2018, 9:53 PM

...(RockB)

I am a bit freaked out!!

...

Edit: Sill being a bit sick, I'd like to have a day or two to think out this update.

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view keiiii's profile

3rd May 2018, 8:41 AM

keiiii

Ethan is probably feeling the same way...

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view melaredblu's profile

20th Jul 2018, 4:52 AM

melaredblu

Yeah, you just killed a bunch of guys with a spike tentacle in front of him, so you're gonna have to give him a minute, 'k?

So they use these appendages to swim? I wonder if their world has more water than Keol does. Maybe they're amphibious.

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view keiiii's profile

21st Jul 2018, 7:33 PM

keiiii

Yeah, their home world is pretty much a giant ocean dotted with very small islands. Really wanting to do a short story set in that world some day...

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