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017-09

posted Wed, September 6, 2017

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view keiiii's profile

6th Sep 2017, 2:10 PM

keiiii

This update is a bit long, so I had to divide it into two images. This is the second one; be sure you didn't miss the first!

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view Steven-Vincent's profile

6th Sep 2017, 6:34 PM

Steven-Vincent

You did a really good job alternating between sadness and humor. It takes a very light touch and you handled it perfectly.

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view keiiii's profile

8th Sep 2017, 2:20 PM

keiiii

Thanks! Always good to know the story works writing-wise :D

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view alston123's profile

7th Sep 2017, 11:59 AM

alston123

What do the words mean?

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view keiiii's profile

8th Sep 2017, 2:19 PM

keiiii

It's just the name of the business. It reads "Pine Needle Acupuncture." :)

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view melaredblu's profile

8th Sep 2017, 3:11 PM

melaredblu

Ah, the burdens of being huge. Smol Danbi doesn't know how lucky he is.

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13th Sep 2017, 2:49 PM

keiiii

It's a good thing the outhouses in this world, at least, tend to be fairly roomy. Even Ethan doesn't have to worry about his knees/elbows touching potentially icky walls.

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