Updates Wednesdays

013-02

posted Tue, December 6, 2016

013-02
post a comment
author comments
view keiiii's profile

6th Dec 2016, 5:41 PM

keiiii

Hitting a bit too close to home.

Facty bits: Facty bits: Jangkki (장끼) means "male pheasant" while Kobyong (Kkuh-Byoung: 꺼병) means "baby pheasant."

end of message
user comments
view melaredblu's profile

6th Dec 2016, 8:25 PM

melaredblu

Whenever you doubt your writing skills, imagine me laughing at wife's dialog, only for my amused smile to quickly sink as I scroll down to the bottom of this page. Because that, right there, was my exact reaction. Holy cow, man. Not pulling any punches.

end of message
view keiiii's profile

6th Dec 2016, 10:46 PM

keiiii

My brain is having a "this comment is awesome and how do I make an equally awesome reply that it deserves?" moment. Thank you ;_;

end of message
view ...(RockB)'s profile

7th Dec 2016, 5:29 PM

...(RockB)

I like the flow of the story/development within this page very much. It had to be *something* about like this, in all honesty, and I like it to happen like this much better than sudden plot twists.

(It's not that I want to (be able to) predict what will happen next, it's having trust to let the story come and not need/want to predict what will happen next... sorry, I can't express it properly, again.) Whatever - right now I'm feeling safe as a reader to not get surprised by something that shouldn't happen, telling from what I know about the characters. Is that what you meant by "critical"? I hope it is :)

end of message
view keiiii's profile

7th Dec 2016, 7:18 PM

keiiii

Your words have made my burden much lighter. I hope I can make more people have that same trust in this story.

end of message
view The Doodler's profile

7th Dec 2016, 9:36 PM

The Doodler

Since the people above have nailed commenting on the scripting, I'm just going to go "Gosh, Ethan's TALL, isn't he?"

end of message
view keiiii's profile

7th Dec 2016, 11:55 PM

keiiii

I would wager these people had never seen any human being with Ethan's body mass.

end of message
view The Doodler's profile

8th Dec 2016, 1:41 PM

The Doodler

I'm guessing it's understood in this language that he's dead? :/ The hunter who fell, I mean?

end of message
view keiiii's profile

8th Dec 2016, 3:01 PM

keiiii

Naw, he's still holding onto that little hope that the guy might be alive. If he was going to be honest about it, he wouldn't have greeted the others with a smile. This is a tight knit community, after all.

end of message
post a comment