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posted Wed, June 22, 2016

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view keiiii's profile

22nd Jun 2016, 9:25 AM

keiiii

Ethan remembered the word "inductor" AND used it in a grammatically correct sentence. So proud of him :')

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view NeilKapit's profile

22nd Jun 2016, 2:22 PM

NeilKapit

Great to see Ethan making progress. It's inevitable that he would manage to pick up more of the world and the specifics of the language with all this immersion, but a lesser writer would've kept him playing the fool non-stop for cheap laughs.

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view keiiii's profile

22nd Jun 2016, 3:38 PM

keiiii

He'll continue to make mistakes for a long time... but yeah, less and less frequently. :)

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view Travis's profile

22nd Jun 2016, 2:40 PM

Travis

Yeah, I'm a cheap laughs kinda guy myself. Good for Ethan though. Getting to the meat and potatoes here. aww yeah.

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view keiiii's profile

22nd Jun 2016, 3:41 PM

keiiii

Nothing wrong with cheap laughs if they work with the story :)

I don't think Ethan's broken speech was ever "funny" though. Endearing, certainly, but not really hilarious or anything?

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view alston123's profile

22nd Jun 2016, 6:11 PM

alston123

Better not be after the kid... I would be on you like soy sauce on a wonton, like white on rice, like Mario on a mushroom. :3 :P XD

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view keiiii's profile

22nd Jun 2016, 8:21 PM

keiiii

I'm imagining you jump-stomping on Lushaka like Mario on a goomba. XD

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view melaredblu's profile

23rd Jun 2016, 1:21 AM

melaredblu

I get the sense that this guy has no interest in being anybody's errand boy, even the queen's. Any semblance of being part of her forces is probably nominal. He seems more the type to be focused on concerns on his own.

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view keiiii's profile

24th Jun 2016, 2:35 AM

keiiii

That would not be inaccurate :)

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