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view keiiii's profile

8th Jun 2016, 1:04 PM

keiiii

So the first chapter has been given a significant revision! The events are the same as before for the most part, but the vibe should be very different -- and in a good way, I hope. The revised chapter 1 can be accessed on the main site. Currently the CF archive retains the old version of chapter 1; I'm thinking of leaving it that way, as a special time capsule edition.

The revision spans over multiple pages, so give it a look! On some pages, it's just a minor tweak or addition, while others have been rewritten and redrawn from scratch. It was the writing that I wanted to fix, not necessarily the art. Let me know what you think!

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view alston123's profile

8th Jun 2016, 3:42 PM

alston123

Trust me, I understand revisions. I've revamped and revised my comics sooooo many times. :P

Why can't we all just get along and be happy in life? Don't hurt Danbi. He's already been through enough. :/

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view keiiii's profile

8th Jun 2016, 7:12 PM

keiiii

It amuses me that we're RIGHT at a point where the previous version of this comic (which was only released in Korean) stopped. Then the reboot + English version happened!

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view Steven-Vincent's profile

8th Jun 2016, 4:42 PM

Steven-Vincent

Heh... cowards, like all bullies. Look at them run.

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view keiiii's profile

8th Jun 2016, 7:11 PM

keiiii

They'd prefer to be called 'opportunists' ;)

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view armandoB's profile

11th Jun 2016, 10:48 AM

armandoB

I'd be scared too

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view keiiii's profile

11th Jun 2016, 2:57 PM

keiiii

And this isn't even his final form!

*bricked*

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view NeilKapit's profile

12th Jun 2016, 7:32 PM

NeilKapit

Didn't he lose his Suyori abilities in the earlier conflict, or is this a different Elyoi?

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view keiiii's profile

13th Jun 2016, 4:28 PM

keiiii

That was just the girl! This guy hurt his feet and isn't a suyori/Elyeo at all; he belongs to a separate, shapeshifting species called Rencho.

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view NeilKapit's profile

15th Jun 2016, 4:20 PM

NeilKapit

Thank you. Forgive my poor recollections, I'll go back and re-read.

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