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view keiiii's profile

4th May 2016, 1:26 PM

keiiii

NO TOUCHY THE POKEY, ETHAN.

The touchy the pokey panel was intended to just fill the space for Danbi's dialog, but it's come to my attention that it's unnecessarily dramatic and implies certain expectations (e.g. he's going to touch it and it'll explode!!!11) that shouldn't be there. I'll eventually change it so it doesn't steal too much attention. But for now, we keep moving forward.

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view lifelight's profile

4th May 2016, 2:12 PM

lifelight

Ooooooo pretty thorns!!! *.*
This page is gorgeous. As usual.

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view keiiii's profile

4th May 2016, 5:57 PM

keiiii

Hard to go wrong with colorful glowing plants!

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view Steven-Vincent's profile

4th May 2016, 3:30 PM

Steven-Vincent

I think the touching panel is fine as is. I didn't think Ethan was going to touch it and explode... I thought he was just looking closely at the thorns.

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view keiiii's profile

4th May 2016, 6:00 PM

keiiii

It's not a big problem on its own, but there's been a long series of similar issues since the beginning of the comic. It's given a epic exciting action adventure vibe to... a worrying number of people. And that keeps leading those readers to disappointments and fizzle-outs. This is not an adventure comic; it's an introspective story that happens to have some adventure in it...

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view Steven-Vincent's profile

4th May 2016, 9:09 PM

Steven-Vincent

What??!?! I thought it was a shoot-em-up!

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view keiiii's profile

4th May 2016, 10:36 PM

keiiii

IKR? The emotions and those pew pew guns are the two pillars of this story! I don't know why I never get any comments on the pew pews!

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view alston123's profile

5th May 2016, 7:32 AM

alston123

Wow. This is so cool! Danbi magic is awesome. :D
Definitely no pokey. :P

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view keiiii's profile

5th May 2016, 7:42 PM

keiiii

Someone needs to put up a No Pokey Allowed sign for poor Ethan.

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view Saeriellyn's profile

6th May 2016, 8:13 AM

Saeriellyn

I do get a little bit of a sense of impending danger from the thorn, but coupled with Danbi's sort of nonchalant attitude, it's not overwhelming. If you were to change it, you might just show the finger actually touching the thorn (on its non-pokey side) to emphasize that Ethan's just curious and no, nothing bad happens.

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view keiiii's profile

8th May 2016, 5:14 PM

keiiii

Yeah, that's probably what I'm gonna do!

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view NeilKapit's profile

7th May 2016, 10:20 PM

NeilKapit

He'll do fine. The ability to make things grow has a built-in-aptitude for the ability to make things wither and die.

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view melaredblu's profile

7th May 2016, 11:09 PM

melaredblu

Well, I wasn't too far off on my theory. He might not be Poison Ivy over here, but he can still protect himself. And Ethan probably could kick much butt if the occasion calls for it.

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